The voice acting,the animation, and the lip syncing were great; however the comedy material needs some work. I guess maybe it is more the lines that needs some attention, they really are not that funny. It just starts with sonic talking knuckles yelling, and random lines from the other characters with exaggerated facial expressions. The situation at the end was not that funny either. I would try to improve the lines of the characters, also look up punchlines and set up too. Good work overall though.
LSHIC(laughing so hard im crying)
one of the best flashes of all time. Sheer genuis. THe reading of the comment was done so well, so well. The music was so perfect. Yuo nailed it.
first flash not bad
Not bad; though it seems a little like the super mario dbz series.
-First i would find a better way of presenting the text as just a line and the words. Get creative leave no stone unturned, no detail half asked a text cloud always work also might need a button to go forward because though u or i can read fast not every one can the action script required for that is almost laughable in its simplicity and supreme lack of effort required, though I haven't played with flash since mx 6 so what do i know.
-Second don't know what angle the series will take but a parody of th smdbz flash would bring some attention to you. also use the wealth of tutorials on ng, and study the different styles and take notes on the flashes of all the popular flash artist on ng.
overall suprisingly alright for a first flash it has potential, sprites are good way to start. good luck with future projects I will be wathcing for more flashes from you
never heard of someone actually using crayons, now was it a crayon style u used or did u scan and draw the actual art. Loved the idea it is very very very stylish I would never get tired of this style u might have also started something so watch out.
Anyways the song was pretty cool had a nice feel to it. A harmony accomponient on the chorus would be nice, just me maybe. the ukalali or guitar would sound better though if was more apparent in the chorus and played still in the bridges less apparent but not completely muted. Also the bass line was really not very fun to listen to and I know bass is not one of the most important things to a casual listener, but my god it was repetitive, liked the transition with the 65% water though. Awesome song congrats nice quality too. Voice reminded me of Bob dylan somewhat good singing on ur part too. Awesome song by itself but suggestions might make it a b it better.
Thanks! I appreciate the feedback on the song too. Yup, it was all drawn with crayon on paper and scanned in!
although that momma joke sucked, rewrite it please for the love of mankind, please. otherwise nicely done.
ahh, yet another spoiled soul who has always had DSL or higher. foolish mortal =P. Glad you liked the rest of it. Sorry for the late response, I'm swamped =_=
nothing short of awesome
the ending was so delightfully unpredictable, that ending was the funniest thing since joecartoon
But i must agree with the fellow before me, the cop needs better voice acting and the could have "ahnold" voice that would make it superbly funny, top marks good flash. A dw i'n caru cymru a bob plethiau sy'n cymraig
I originally planned to have the two Terminators talk to one another in an Arnol voice, but I didn't develop it because it took away from the seriousness of the movie. Maybe if the Cyborg had gotten it...
And everyone knows that only Blockhead is allowed to do that.
As with everyone else I say that the animation was good, but that song bugged the hell out of me, it wasn't even music, I hate ambient music; My god Akira the don can make better music while taking a crap in the toilet. Comunism does not work, look at the soviet union, and china. The chinese government still had to make their economy a freer economy, and the ussr was killing itself. Another thing, if I had 600 bucks I wouldn't let someone else use it. The rich earned their money, and the world has no right taking it, but that still doesn't mean the rich should horde it all. I follow the holy spirit, and most times when he says give I give, unless I become disobedient...Well anyways even though I do not agree with the idea it still is an alright movie but the song...
it was alright
the graphics are fine, everything is just fine, although it is obviously well thought but it is a halfway-smirk type funny. And the fellow before i think you should get new speakers or something, because sound worked just fine for me, and I am listening through laptop speakers, so turn up your volume
the movie only, and not the agenda is good
zef for making such an awesome flash u deserve a monument at ng hq, ond akira o dych chi'n deall a darllen cymraeg, gwybodwch hwn: bod yn o chi dw i ddim yn cymeradwyo am y gyd. cewch i eglwys dda, dych chi ddim yn eglwys babyddol, ond eglwys, brotestannaidd, dda. ond dw i ddim yn cydweld gyd bob plethiau blair fe wnaeth e wneud, dw i'n hoffi e iawn.
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