very innovative
never heard of someone actually using crayons, now was it a crayon style u used or did u scan and draw the actual art. Loved the idea it is very very very stylish I would never get tired of this style u might have also started something so watch out.
Anyways the song was pretty cool had a nice feel to it. A harmony accomponient on the chorus would be nice, just me maybe. the ukalali or guitar would sound better though if was more apparent in the chorus and played still in the bridges less apparent but not completely muted. Also the bass line was really not very fun to listen to and I know bass is not one of the most important things to a casual listener, but my god it was repetitive, liked the transition with the 65% water though. Awesome song congrats nice quality too. Voice reminded me of Bob dylan somewhat good singing on ur part too. Awesome song by itself but suggestions might make it a b it better.